Your posts would probably be taken more seriously if you wrote them correctly/differently. I cannot stress this enough, I do not mean it as an insult, but you write like a middle schooler. I tried to come up with a less... demeaning characterization, but I couldn't find a subtle way to say it. To be much more specific - you write a lot, but there's very little substance in most of the posts you do. If you could make your posts a lot more concise and clear, they probably wouldn't be so ill-received.
For example, your OP, I'll rewrite it for you, just so you can get an example of where I'm coming from. ( And presumably, everyone else who thinks TLDR when they see your posts. )
I'm pretty unhappy with the direction the developers have been taking the game, along several different aspects of the game.
You should change the 'sell' button to 'dismiss', or to something that doesn't walk the ethical line of selling another person.
It would be nice to have some additional customization's/events/uses or merge-abilities for eudaemon.
I have an idea for an event that could be really fun, but I'm going to save that for a later post/thread.
I'm writing all of this to make the post longer. Even though I already said I would save this information for another thread.
You actually go into some depth in this last part, and actually flush out some details, so I don't particularly have a problem with it.
If you'll notice though, I just changed like 6 paragraphs into like 7 sentences. I don't think anyone would really mind if you got really into depth about your ideas, but most of what you're saying is just padding.
In anycase, that's just my two cents. To reiterate, I do not mean any of this to be demeaning or offending, only a friendly critique/suggestion at worst.
For example, your OP, I'll rewrite it for you, just so you can get an example of where I'm coming from. ( And presumably, everyone else who thinks TLDR when they see your posts. )
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If you'll notice though, I just changed like 6 paragraphs into like 7 sentences. I don't think anyone would really mind if you got really into depth about your ideas, but most of what you're saying is just padding.
In anycase, that's just my two cents. To reiterate, I do not mean any of this to be demeaning or offending, only a friendly critique/suggestion at worst.
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